Touching things
Sometimes, we have to write things down so that years later we can remind
ourselves of what happened.
Back before the turn of the century, (Still love saying that just to confuse
people.) in ’98, I thought of a story about a guy, Reggie, who could touch
people. It ended up being a good story, if a little dark. ‘Just a Touch pt1’.
When my friend, the lovely Miss T, read it; she said, ‘GW, how come you never
write a story about us?’ So I wrote the second story with her and Miss S. She
liked it, even though it did not portray her in a good light. ‘JT#2’
In ’00 I thought of additional info on Reggie and got halfway through writing
JT#3 when I realized that it was crap and the facts were wrong; so I abandoned
it. (But wisely, did not throw it away.) Seventeen years later, ’15, I thought
of more details to explain my character Jamie Skinner. And to do it, I had to
add Billy McGregor. JT#4 aka Wicked Pissah. Now mind you, these are all little
five to seven page stories and they pretty well stand alone, mostly.
So last summer, ‘18’, I reread the stories and realized I had to explain Billy!
Cake, I thought. Everything began to fill my head and get written down. It
flowed, unstoppable! It was one of those times where my muse parks her cute
little butt on my shoulder and begins whispering and giggling in my ear. I
wrote ten to fifteen pages in a few days, and then all the stories swirled in
my head and began to coalesce into one big story, all in the same universe. I
had to stop and do rewrites. Names, dates, ages, places, east coast, west
coast, foreshadowing, who was related to whom. And she was still whispering and
giggling in my ear! Then go back to Billy’s story and stopped when it got to
twenty four pages, and I wasn’t done!
But I could stop it and fill in the middle, or not. By December, the whole
group meshed together nicely and I gave everything to older brother to review.
And it dawned on me how I could take unfinished JT#3, remove the crap, and turn
it into Sally’s story and tie up some loose ends!
And now I have five chapters and six will be Jamie’s story. Yeah, I seriously
need to tell her story!
So, I was explaining chapter six to my brother and his daughter by saying ‘It
starts like this.’, and rattled off a paragraph off the top of my head. ‘No!’,
he said. That’s the prologue, just like you said it! Write that down and the
whole series starts with that paragraph. Then write chapter six. ’ My niece
agreed. So here is how the whole series starts. Can I now go back and tell
Jamie’s story? I’ve got to do her right. You do not want to face those
blue-gray eyes when she is angry!
JUST A TOUCH
Prologue
By Greg W. Hogg
©1-19-19
Jamie Skinner sat at her favorite table in the back corner of an old mom and
pop coffee shop, just off Sixth Street in Berkeley. One reason she liked it was
because it was quiet and no one bothered you. The main reason was that it was
the only place in Berkeley that served a good cup of tea, she despised that
nasty brown stuff that most people drank.
On her table, which sloped a little to her right, were some personal documents
to review. She set her pen down next to her tea, not bothering with the cap,
and picked up the thick mug of Keemun tea. She preferred this tea when she had
to think.
As she closed her eyes and took a sip, enjoying the smoky aroma and the taste
of the tea, the pen, no longer held in place by the mug, began to roll.
It picked up speed as it rolled and was almost to the end of the table when it
suddenly stopped. Jamie casually reached down with her right hand and picked up
the pen. As she put down the tea, the cap floated over to the pen and onto the
tip. She reached over with her left hand, and pushed the cap on.
The sound of chairs scraping on the wooden floor caused her to open her eyes. A
couple had pulled up chairs and were sitting down at her table!
“Mind if we join you?” The man asked as he sat. He was good looking, with a
nice, easy smile.
“Please let us.” The woman said as she also sat down. She had a sweet smile and
Jamie immediately felt at ease.
The man moved his right hand above her pen and the pen floated up into his
hand. He grasped it, turned the cap towards her, and part of the cap seemed to
get sliced off by nothing.
“You should be more careful.” Reggie said, a look of concern on his face. “It’s
not safe to display what you can do, in public.”
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